Feedback 2
In todays lesson we got feedback for our last showing of our title sequence. The feedback was mostly positive with people saying they really liked the editing and the contrast between the good and the evil which is what we wanted.
Specific bits of editing that people liked was the typography. Unlike most of the groups our text made its way on to the screen instead of just appearing and went off in different directions which worked very well. Another thing they liked was at the end our soundtrack had a lot of drums and with every beat our title of the film appeared a letter at a time in sync with the beat. Another thing which the class really liked was our shot of harry and the strobe light. We put Harry infant of the strobe light and turn the lights off in the room and we just let it flash and filmed it and it outlined Harrys body which was really cool because it suited our genre perfectly.
However, there are some parts that we could improve on. We didn't get enough footage for the detective scene so were doing more soon so in the sequence that we presented there was a black screen for about three seconds where there should be another shot. Furthermore we were told that the font was ok but wasn't that good and we can find much better fonts to suit our sequence.
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